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A day in the future


En science fiction stil/fortelling.

Karakter: 5+

Sjanger:FortellingLastet opp:04.02.2006
Språkform:EngelskForfatter:Anonym
Tema:Science Fiction
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How I got there was and still is a big mystery. I have always been fascinated by the future and how things might become as society becomes and by the way we humans develop technology. Maybe it was the curiosity that led me to the future?

 

Well back to how I got where I was that day. It all started that Tuesday morning not too long ago. I woke up and felt anxious and weird, like something was going to happen. I got dressed and ate my breakfast as usual and went to school. I was not able to focus at school, and things that usual felt so familiar suddenly became a little frightening. After a couple of weird hours at school, I decided to take the elevator to lunch. I got in the elevator and pressed the button for the second floor and was waiting for the doors to shut. The lights suddenly started flickering and the doors slammed shut. The elevator started going up in a great speed, it was out of control! Suddenly my whole world became black. I passed out from the all the stress that day and all the weird things happening to me.

 

Next thing you know I was standing in this colorful room covered with moving tiles on the ground. The sky was a yellow color with purple skies and the temperature was just right. Not too cold, not too hot. I remember feeling very light and bouncy. The creatures a around me stared at me like I was an alien, and I figured that I looked a lot different from the creatures around me. They all looked the same here; it was hard telling anyone apart. You could tell the males apart from the females but other than that it was extremely hard. The females had shoulder length baby blue hair with strands of glitter in it. They had big round eyes which changed color. I learned later that this had to do with the people’s mood and that the eyes changed color according to the mood of the person. The females’ lips were a yellowish color and really caught your attention. The males had short green hair. The color reminded you of vomit! They had huge eyes, which also changed color according to their moods. Their lips were more neutral colored and you didn’t really notice them at first. Both females and males had a pink color of their skin and it looked kind of see through, like jelly. They also had a tail looking thing on their forehead and three arms. They were all wearing the same kind of robe. It was a very bright colored robe and it looked as if someone had spilled paint on it. The funny thing was that the different parts of colors kept moving and changing places with each other. On their feet they were wearing huge glittery moon boots. They seemed to float on everything around them. I realized really fast that the reason why they were looking at me weird was because I really stood out with my dark brown hair, my chocolate brown eyes, my blue jeans and my white tank top, I was not exactly bright colored.

 

As I looked around I could see big flying objects in the air, they looked like u.f.o’s and I got scared because I thought they were air planes and where I came from they do not ever fly that close to the ground. I looked a little closer and I realized that there were people sitting in these flying objects there were people! I then realized that this was their form of transportation. The machines did not let out any gasses or dangerous things that could harm the environment. They did not even make a noise! This was a great invention in my eyes. If I would get in one right that second, I would probably not do it because I was little skeptical of my own safety at that point.

 

Still not knowing what year or dimension I was in I started to look around for creatures to ask. This was not a very hard problem because there were creatures all around me. The first creature that I tried to ask was an elderly male; I could tell that he was a little bit older than the other creatures around him because his pink skin was kind of crumbled and wrinkled. His tail was broken and some kind of blue liquid came out of it.

 

“Excuse me, I am a little lost, could you please tell me what year we are in and what this planet is called?” I asked. The man smiled but looked at me like was some sort of an idiot and he kept on walking. I sighted and felt extremely helpless. I heard some funny noises behind me and I turned around to see two creatures talking through little phone looking things about the size of a piece of gum. I nervously walked over and tried to explain with my hands that I needed to use one of their speakers. One of the creatures, a female handed me her speaker looking thing and I started talking in it. The other female apparently understood me and started answering me back. I was actually having a conversation with a creature from the future. The female creature explained that I was in the year 3000 in a galaxy called Xobo. The creatures here were not called humans or people, but xorobots and each individual did not have a name but a number. I was now talking to number 112030. I was told that I was not the first one from planet earth that I had been lost and ended up here. It was all part of an experiment that some of the xorobots were having. She seemed like she was very busy and she left immediately after telling me that I had to find the information center. If only finding the information center in this chaos was as easy as she made it seem.

 

 I thought that if I could observe things around me I might be able to get some sort of an idea where the information center was.  Planet Xobo was a very colorful and active planet. Things kept changing and I could not keep track of what was happening around me. There was some sort of annoying noises around me the whole time and realized that this was there form for music, in my mind I would call this rubbish.

 

Robots! I did not notice them before now! They were all around. They were grey, big and not so pretty, but yet amazing. I loved their way to communicate with not only with the other robots but also with the creatures that lived on Xobo. The one thing I remember is that a female creature walked up to the robot and asked for something. Suddenly a sandwich looking thing popped out of the robot, the creature grabbed it and went off. I was so stunned at this I believe I stood there for about ten minutes just admiring this wonderful machine. I was thinking to myself that if I could bring one back to year 2005 I would never have to worry about chores again. The robots eventually noticed that I was staring at them like a maniac and one came running over to me. My first reaction was to run but I stopped for a minute realizing that he could help me find the information center. I concentrated on speaking very slowly and hoping that he might understand me and surprisingly he did! He was speaking a slow voice and it was almost as he was repeating himself. He started asking me questions about planet earth how it was living there without robots and the technology that they had. It was hard that question because I did not know another world than this and this robot knew how I felt! It had feelings! I started getting a little anxious about getting home and I did not even know how or if I was getting home so I asked the robot if he could tell me where I was supposed to find the information center. “Grab my head”, he said. I nervously grabbed his head and he we started to fly. I could not believe what I was experiencing! This was amazing! He flew me to this little booth were a pink and blue creature with a weird looking hat sat. He kind of reminded of the clowns that you see in festivals. I politely thanked the robot and he flew off into the yellowish sky with all the lovely purple clouds. The clown looking creature grabbed my hand and he pulled med towards this green machine. Now I was getting really nervous, what if I did not get home but ended up on some other weird planet in the future? I decided to take a chance and I stepped inside. I closed my eyes and said a little prayer. The doors slammed shut! Once again everything became black. I tumbled around and I woke up. There was my math teacher looking down on me with a weird smile on her face. If only she knew what I just experienced…


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Cathrine
23.03.2006 18:13

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Jeg synes det var en riktig så bra stil. Applaus.
 Smile :-\) Bra jobbet med setninger og ting som det.
Bare 5+?
Burde vært 6  Razz :-P

Ørjan
09.07.2006 23:19

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Dette var en veldig intelligent historie du kom opp med, veldig bra denne fortjener du absolutt en sekser på, og ikke en 5+

kk
18.05.2006 22:47

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skal ha xamen i engels i måren jippi! da blir gøy me nåke nytt.. ønsk meg lykke til.

bra
23.05.2006 16:21

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ossen klasse gikk du i når du skrev denna !!??

Hiba
11.10.2006 21:45

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heftig stiil asz..

jippi!
08.03.2006 09:47

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JEg er den første som skrev kommentar!!!YES!!!Bra fortelling Smile :-\)JIPPI HURRA

BRA!!!
15.03.2006 19:29

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Skal skrive engelsk stil imorgen- og hodet er helt tomt for ideer! Etter at jeg leste denne kom ideene med en gang!

fgdhj
25.04.2006 13:01

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dritt bra.du fortjener den karakteren du har fått.stå påååååååååååååå

st
27.04.2006 11:54

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i hvilken klasse gikk du i når du skrev denne?


16.05.2006 19:36

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Hvor gammel var du når du skrev denne stilen? Den var vek\ldig bra, mange bra setninger og synonymer Wink ;-\)

=/
20.11.2006 20:04

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Ganske bra stil. Bra skildring godt språk.
Men en ting jg ikke likte, var at du gikk ganske fort rett på sak. Og at han gikk inn i heisen og plutselig kom til fremtiden var litt overdrevent. Men men (-)5 sier jg =/

Forfatteren=)
07.06.2007 18:45

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var 13 år når jeg skrev denne Smile :-\)

fdgfd
26.05.2006 22:22

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god

n0r
27.09.2007 17:25

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nice!

Annette07
29.10.2007 20:18

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Kjempe bra stil du har skrevet!  Wink ;-\) Men merket meg et par feil, som f.eks at color, skrives colour, og ikke color, og center skrive centre, ellers var det veldig, veldig bra!  Smile :-\) Lykke til videre!

hei
19.11.2007 17:12

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jeg synes det var kul historie! kopierte stilen, og endra osv. la inn egne ord ++ og jeg fikk 4, læreren sa det var litt for mye skildringer og at historien "stoppa" litt opp, pga det  Wink ;-\)

Me=)
06.04.2008 19:35

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Hei, Smile :-\) jeg synes dette var en veldig bra fortelling. Den er spennende og morsom! Stå på!  Wink ;-\) Wink ;-\)

Christina EW.
20.11.2007 22:18

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det med colour og color greiene, det er riktig både med u eller uten u. Det spørs om du skrives som amerikansk eller Britisk. hvis du skriver som britisk så bruker du U (COLOUR), men hvis ikke så blir det bare COLOR. Bare så dere vet det  Smile :-\)

Meg :)
31.03.2009 17:11

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Det var en bra fortelling  Wink ;-\)

du fortjente mer enn så  Smile :-\)

Monkeyporn
27.05.2009 17:29

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Jeg syntest denne her var velidig bra  Very Happy :-D Du har ett talent i å skrive historier ! stå på !!  Smile :-\)

Meg!
20.05.2010 18:12

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Det står at noen her har kopiert stilen, men endra på den.. Du som har gjort det fortjente ikke en firer.. du fortjente en ener! forfatteren av denne stilen brukte masse tid på å skrive også kommer du og sier at du har skrevet den! :@ det spiller INGEN rolle om du har endra litt på den! du har likevel herma! :L Så jævla irriterende at folk gjør sånn! er de så tomme i hodet at de må stjele fra andre? ;/

Smarting
02.06.2013 11:29

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Lærene på skolen vår sier at det er lov til å bruke andre sine tekster, så lenge man endrer litt på den!!!!!!!!!!!
TA DEN "MEG!" Jeg skal bruke den på Tentamen imora!!

Forfatternen
01.12.2014 19:04

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Eg herma bare etter ein stil av richardson (EIN KJENT FORFATTAR) Og gjorde den om til engelsk. Så lagra eg den opp på fronter. kopierte på tentamen og limte inn. Så ble ferdig tidleg og. HÅPER LÆRAREN MIN IKKJE SER DENNE KOMMENTAREN  Wink ;-\)

Anonym
21.09.2009 16:50

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den vart velik flott stil/forteling

chill
26.05.2010 12:04

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ey, "Meg!" chill litt a

lol
03.10.2011 20:25

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bra

hei
03.03.2013 20:36

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bra stil jeg skal kopiere den..


04.03.2013 16:29

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om hvis jeg skriver den ned på et ark, og skriver den inn på pc. Vil det komme plagerings kontroll

Leo
08.11.2017 18:00

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Spendt på hvordan den blir som norsk i en fortelling

Anonym
25.04.2018 17:13

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Bra stil, skulle ønske litt mer utdypelser, men ellers bra. Stå på


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