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Sad destiny

Historien har to alternative endinger (pga. oppgave læreren ga oss).
Sjanger:FortellingLastet opp:20.04.2005
Tema:Andre fortellinger

My feet wouldn’t hold me much longer. I was exhausted. I did not know how long I had been running, running away from everythin. People said I was weak, but they do not know what I’ve been through. I’ve been through hell and back again. When I saw history started to repeat itself I couldn’t take it anymore, I didn’t have the strength to end my life so I ran.


I had no idea where I was, not that it bothered me. As long as I didn’t jave to go back, I would be happy. I looked around to examin my surrondings when I saw something. Whatever it was it started to move towards me, being in my state, I paniced and started to run again.


First ending:

I never looked back at it. I was afraid it could be right behind me. Since I was un aware of what it truly was, I didn’t know its fyschics. Suddenly I noticed that I had entered a forrest. I could feel the branches making small cuts on my arms and legs. All of a sudden I tripped over something, it was then I noticed my sevear injury. On my left wrist there was a long cut.


I felt the ache in my foot and started to cry, though I have grown numb to the feeling of the moist drops running down my cheecks. I could see the blood drop slowly to the ground, I didn’t want to stop it. It felt good, like all the pain inside dissapeared alongside with my blood. I looked up at the sky and saw the beatiful moon, before I closed my eyes and everything black.


Second ending:

I looked back to … it one last time. It was then I noticed what it was. This frightened me, and I got so overwhelmed I couldn’t move. It came up to me and looked at me with those vicious eyes. “I told you not to do that”


I felt a fist in my abdamon, and I fell to my knees from the pain and exhaustion. I got several punches before I was forced to go back. I felt my soul and body die inside of me when I received this order.

If only I had been strong enough. This would not be my destiny.

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