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A bedtime story


Fortelling inspirert av "Dances with wolves".

Karakter: 5- (grunnkurs). Rettet etterpå.

Sjanger:FortellingLastet opp:05.11.2004
Språkform:EngelskForfatter:Anonym
Tema:Friluftsliv
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Once upon a time, in a land not so far away from here, there was a war. The war was between the Native Americans and the Americans. On the American side there was a very brave young man. He was fighting for his country, and in a heroic action he was promoted. He chose to get sent to a fort. He really wanted to see a buffalo. So he spent his days on this fort with a strong horse and a curious wolf. He was just waiting for further instructions from his men, but after a long time he realized he had to start saving his food.

 

This one night, when he was fast asleep, some pounding noises awaked him. Someone was trying to steel his horse. Lucky for him the horse got away and came back to him. So now that he knew that there were people around him, he saddled up his horse and started his journey. After a long time, he found a woman by a tree, as he got closer he could hear that she was crying, and he saw that she was hurt. The young man put her on his strong horse after she had passed out. He brought her back to a camp where there were some Native Americans. They didn’t want anything to do with him, and sent him away in a language he had never heard before.

 

But after a while, the tribe wanted to get to know this young man. One day they came to the man’s fort, they didn’t understand what the other person said. But the woman that the young man saved used to talk the language that the man talked. And the holy man from the tribe wanted her to talk to him, and tell him what the young man said. The young man and the woman spent very much time together. She tought him their language, and he helped her with his language. The tribe excepted the young man.

 

This one dark night, the man woke up and ran outside to see what all the noise was. And there they were! Hundreds, maybe thousands of buffalos. So he hurried to the tribes land, and told them what he just saw. The entire tribe packed their things to go hunting for the buffalos. And when they found them, there were so many buffalos. More buffalos than the young man ever thought he would see. The young man became a hero of the tribe when he saved a young boy from being attract by a buffalo.

 

The relationship between the young man and the woman got better. The man tought of nothing else than her. He really loved her. The woman loved him too, but she was still in mourning of her dead husbound, so she could not show her love in front of the tribe. But the young man and the woman’s love were so strong that they met secretly, expressing their love to one and other. The holy man finally told the young woman that she didn’t have to morne any more. This gave the young man and the woman the chance to get married, and they did. The woman was so beautiful that the man could hardly hear what the holy man said. And the woman didn’t think she could ever be happier then she was now. She finally found the man of her dreams.


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10th grade
30.10.2006 20:40

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Ikke meninga åå "ødelegge" den gode floowen her assåå,, mn dette søkka rææva! 3 pluss!  Confused :-\?

grisevorte
21.04.2005 16:49

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bra stil Wink ;-\) eller hva enn det er....  Confused :-\?


23.05.2006 17:11

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bra stil .. kan du hjelpe meg å skrive en stil i dag



11.05.2007 19:28

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Var bra denne, men den var kanskje litt mer referat av "Dances with Wolves" enn en fortelling inspirert av den. Har sett filmen, dne er kjempebra.

Lionel
12.03.2009 12:24

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Du må være litt komfortabel Smile :-\)


messi
19.09.2010 18:52

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syntes fortellingen var sykt bra og fortjener en 5  Razz :-P

fastblackman
21.05.2012 19:16

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:__)J NOT BAD . mhm

En i verden
26.05.2012 14:52

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bra men FOR mye inspirert av filmen "Dances with wolves".
Den føles nesten som en referat. Du burde ha endret litt men stilen er ikke så vest  Smile :-\)

Ingen
06.01.2014 17:03

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Det var ikke noe flyt i det hele tatt... >.>

sjangerhøna
18.11.2015 09:45

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Dette er jo ikke fortelling men eventyr skal vi tro første setning.

hei
23.05.2016 09:52

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dette er vel ikke en 5`er tekst? jeg ville sagt en jevn 3`er


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