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A brave hero!


Handler om en kriger og en trollmann som slåss mot en stor og sterk drage.

Karakter: 5 (8. klasse)

Sjanger:EventyrLastet opp:19.03.2012
Språkform:EngelskForfatter:Anonym
Tema:Eventyr
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Once upon a time in a little village named Velucia, there was a young man. His name was Harold, and he owned a small farm in the outside of the village. The wheat and milk he sold was giving him money to buy food and clothes. He was not rich or poor.

 

One day he met a wise man, who claimed to be a wizard. He said that he had magical powers and could do almost everything. He wanted a man who was brave enough to take on a great quest. To kill the huge, and powerful dragon. The dragon had rampaged the village and other nearby settlements for hundreds of years. Many great warriors had been killed by it. The wizard said that he had been commanded by the king to do everything to stop it. So when the wizard asked Harold to come with him he answered: “Let me think about, will you?” “Yes, indeed!” the wizard answered.

 

The next day Harold woke up with a smile. “The time has come, it's my destiny.” He immediately took contact with the wizard, and they started their quest. They had to walk a long distance, and Harold got really tired. In the middle of the desert he collapsed, so they put up their camp, and took a rest.

 

The next morning the sun was shining very brightly. They started walking again, even though they were very tired. Only a day of walking was left, until they reached the mountain where the dragon lived.

 

When they arrived they met a great disappointment, there was a steep cliff rising about two thousand feet. The stunned wizard said: “Well, we better start climbing.”

 

After five exhausting hours they finally reached the top, and could see the huge dragon's nest. “Okay so we have got to have a good plan” said Harold. “No, we can just walk in there and stab the dragon in his back.” said the wizard. “You crazy old man!” said Harold. “Do you want to get us killed?” After a couple of minutes planning they went with the idea that Harold was going to distract the dragon, while the wizard was going to try to cut off its head. It was a risky plan, but it could work. Also the wizard made a sword appear with his magical powers.

 

“It's action time!” yelled Harold, when he ran into the dragon's nest. The dragon turned around and growled. It was so loud that he had to cover his ears. Then suddenly completely out the blue the dragon turned around and looked right at the wizard. In a couple of seconds the wizard was dead. Now the dragon raged at Harold. Harold stood completely still, and watched the dragon run towards him. Harold took a giant leap, and stabbed his sword right into the dragons neck. It growled again, and fell over to the side. It was dead!

 

The brave Harold was rewarded with all he wished, and lived happily ever after.


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04.02.2013 09:56

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Yay, this was a good story.

Mike
13.04.2012 14:10

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Jeg kan ikke skjønne hvordan dette fikk 5 når den ble skrevet i 8. klasse. Ikke det at den er dårlig, den har litt spenning og humo, og god engelsk, men den er ganske kort og slutten føles ALT for brå.

Hadde det vært meg, ville jeg gitt den en 4- eller 4.

Mike2
29.05.2012 22:49

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God engelsk, men ikke alt var rett i forhold til sjangeren, og den er veldig kort. min karakter på dette: 4 eller 4+

Leah
21.05.2012 22:07

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HELT ENIG Mike den var kort
Jeg hadde gitt den 3 +

Håkon
22.05.2013 10:46

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Vel, dere må jo forstå at dette er en 8. klassing som har skrevet, og i åttende er ikke kriteriene like høy som dere eventuellt har. (Håkon tiende)


24.05.2013 14:49

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bra skrivd denne er bra å kopiere så jeg kan jukse på tentamen på mandag  Smile :-\)

623ds
18.10.2013 21:22

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"Mikes" dere er retarda. Lengden har ingenting med ein karakter å gjøre..Jez

the beast
24.11.2015 20:16

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veldig bra historie kunne fortjent en 5+ isteden

Osama bin laden
15.09.2016 11:37

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why is there no nuke in this adventure? where is me and Bush?

HytteMann756
06.12.2013 12:31

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Jeg ville gitt denne teksten en 4+! Ellers bra! .-D


09.12.2014 19:18

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Viss dette fekk 5 så har den skulen (streng grad -23) og normale skular rundt 10 sååååå.... duh

Tentamen
05.01.2015 22:27

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Har tentamen i engelsk imorra... Takk for ideen. ... Hobbiten, hørt om det... Ganske likt

Snap - idevido
16.11.2015 10:23

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Frey

victor
16.11.2015 21:32

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problemet er at nå til dags finnes det nåke som heter plagiat-kontroll...

Annersj
17.02.2016 14:13

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pewdiepie
25.10.2016 09:54

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5

Emma
21.11.2016 12:09

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Bra historie, synd det er plagiat-kontroll. Jeg ville definitivt kopiert den.  Wink ;-\)


21.03.2017 10:49

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Denne tråden vil bli anmeldt på grunn av upassende innhold!

Vidar
08.05.2017 08:56

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I love you

Lucas
28.11.2017 16:27

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Morsomt at du hentet litt inn fra Hobbiten. Karakteren er 5

Hei
21.10.2015 15:51

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Var ikkje ein 5 mere ein 3+


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