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Dette er en fortelling om vennskap.

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Sjanger:FortellingLastet opp:28.01.2009
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Max is a man who lives in the rich area, and his father is a rich business man. His father is an owner of Super Star Company. Nix is Max’s best friend, and he is from a middleclass family. Nix lives in the rich area like Max.


The first time when Nix and Max met each other was at Burger King, Aalesund in Norway. Max has ordered a big cheese hamburger, and he has forgotten his credit card, come then Mix and pays my receipt. Max was angry with “Why does he pay my receipt?” Do I think, and he looks like a lower class than me, in Afghanistan they will called him “Middle flatnose” because he looks like a middle class. When he had paid my receipt then I ask him “Why did you paid my receipt?” He said to me “I saw you did not have your credit card, and you look like a very hungry man, and that is because I paid your receipt.” I said to him “Yes, You have right, and I like you. Can we be friends?” Nix said “yes, of course!”


Some after Nix and Max have been friends, then Max’s father asks him for “What do you like to have when you are adult?” I just said “I will be like my best friend Nix!” My dad said “Is Nix from a rich family like us or what?” I said “No, dad he is the most intelligent middleclass boy, I know ever.” My dad was very angry, when he listens to me. Before says something, I think “My dad hates middleclass people, but Nix is my best friend. I through likes dad when me seen him for the first time. My dad say “Be careful! That is all I will say to you now!”


I do not know what type job me like, but my dad says you must be a businessman like me, but I do not like to be a businessman like my dad. Nix will be a policeman like his father, so that can an interesting job. It is circa 1 year to I must know what type of job I want.


The last day before me and Nix will go to the police college in Oslo, and my dad is very angry with because I will not be a businessman like him, but Nix father is very happy because his father is a policeman.


After some years, Nix and Max are policemen and they join at Oslo policestation, and theirs first job is to arrest a criminal at Oslo city, when the criminal seen them he want to shot them with pistol. The shot hit Max, then Nix jump and say “ No!” and it hit Nix to the end.


Some days after Nix dead, Max father came to Nix farther and says “Middleclass is better than rich people.”

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29.01.2009 18:35

Jeg har skrevet den, selvom jeg fikk 3, så du få en ide til å skrive.

14.04.2009 21:12

Helt enig med deg, jeg fikk en ide  Smile :-\)

Ok. Jeg er best
27.11.2012 09:15

Den var jojo veldig bra

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